09-05-2006, 11:07 AM
I dont know if this is a place to post this, but I wanted to share my phantom phan phiction with you all
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She was sitting at the chronicle room. She was looking amazed, and I guess it might be something from the chronicles that she was reading this summer, since she came back from US for the vacation. This summer she was concentrating on reading the chronicles, while kit was learning the jungle by visiting each and every single tribe. He told them that he was a tourist from USA who wanted to learn about tribes in Bangalla.
“Only the phantom could travel faster than time” Old jungle saying. But now I am failing to catch up with time. Times have gone so quickly. I still remember the day the twins were born, and the moment that I knew that it was twins. And then they learned to walk, then started school, now both are sophomores are college. I am getting old, but I will have to hold on until one of them is ready to take this role and continue the legacy. I don’t know which one, both are excellent at everything, but I have to choose someone soon.
Suddenly the jungle drums started pounding. The message was that the Tourist from America was taken hostage by some unknown terrorists. All I knew that second was Kit was in trouble. I will have to act fast. By the time Heloise heard the drums too. I told her to follow me and hero on her horse, a present that I gave her for her 20th birthday, which she named Thunder. When we ran out towards the horses, Guran came towards me. He looked panicked.
Guran: “O mighty friend, our dear kit is in deep trouble. I think you remember babaru, whom you gave 10 years of hard labor as a punishment for trying to steal valuables from the minor treasure room last year. As you know he escaped from deep woods, and you forgave him, and told to of us to spy on him at mawittan. Now one of our spies came to know saying that he sold the secret of the phantom legend to the Singh Brotherhood and the other one of the spies have been killed by him. He even told the brotherhood where the kids are.”
Phantom: “Wait Guran! Do you think that the Singh brother hood with the help of babaru kidnapped kit so that I will go and see them?”
Guran: “I am afraid so my great friend. They have camped near the wambasi, so we could tell the wambasi to attack them and save kit.”
Phantom: “No Guran, it’s too risky, I will do it myself. And Kit is my child, and it is my duty as a dad to save him. I am happy that Diana is not here. She would have been terrified if she was here.
Heloise: “Dad I will come with you to save Kid”
Phantom: “OK, but on one condition, that you obey what ever I say. I don’t want to lose you.”
We got on the horses, and rode towards wambasi tribe.
I heart was pounding so hardly, I didn’t know what I had to do. Should I surrender myself and Save Kit, or should I fight them, with Heloise on my side. I have to think of something fast. I might be at wambasi territory soon. Yes, I am going to surrender myself, and save the kids. I will find some way to escape from the Singh brotherhood, that’s what I did whole my life, and I am going to continue doing that till my death.
Phantom: “Heloise, Now listen carefully. We have a change of plan. You are going to stay with the wambasi tribe. I will tell them that you are the sister of the American Student, which is kit. They will take care of you.
Heloise:” But dad I can’t do that. I want to come with you. I want to learn how to handle this kind of situation, and moreover I want to save kit.”
Phantom: Okay, you are right. You have to learn how handle this kind of situation. But for your safety stay far from me and watch me. If kit comes out alone, just go home. I will come back later. If you think I am hurt you will still have to go back to deep woods, and seek help from Guran.
Heloise: OK dad.
We reached the Wambasi Tribe’s Territory, and as I thought they were waiting for me. They told me that they were to accompany me on this journey. I introduced Heloise as the missing kid’s sister. I was happy that I had a team of skilled archers for me. They were taught by the Bandars. The Leader of the group led me to the Singh Brotherhood’s camping place.
The place looked very guarded. They had armed Singh’s outside the camp, which make a direct attack difficult. I am still undecided on what to do, but I have to do something. I told them and Heloise to stay where we were, when I go in and look for Kit.
I slowly walked towards the tent; the guards haven’t seen me yet. I slowly moved into the main tent. Luckily, the guards didn’t even notice it. “Phantom moves like a tiger” old jungle saying. I looked inside the tent; I was surprised to see who it was. It was Dabai Singh.
Phantom: “hello mate, how is your day going? Long time no see.
Dabai: Impressive Phantom, how did you get in without any of my guards knowing? I put the best Singhs for that and you still got in.
Phantom: All of your guards were sleepy; make them some coffee when you have free time at bloomsbay prison will ya!
Dabai: Oh the Immortal phantom came to rescue an American student.
Hahaha I was waiting all my life for this moment. When my dear friend Babaru here told me the truth about you, I thought this guy was kidding. I took a risk by believing a traitor of his own tribe. (Babaru couldn’t believe what Dabai called him.) Sorry man but I don’t need you anymore. Good bye forever.
Before I could stop, Dabai threw a sharp knife at him.
Dabai: I did a favor for you man. I didn’t tell anyone your little secret because I wanted to do it all myself. This is some thing that many of my ancestors failed to accomplish. They all thought you were immortal. Now I know the SECRET. I am going to finish you and your son here. Your daughter wont even dare to become the phantom. She is a girl, what can she do herself.
He pointed his gun at Kit, and told me to drop all my weapons. I had to do it. Is the phantom legend going to end here? Can Heloise take over as phantom? I don’t know. I have to do some thing. Dabai took all the weapons and threw them into the back of the tent. I couldn’t move. If I move Kit will be in grave danger. I can’t afford than. More over Dabai is a very skilled and young warrior. I don’t know if even I could fight him barehanded. Now he pointed the gun at me.
Dabai: “I am the luckiest of the Singhs phantom. None of the Singhs got to kill the phantom and next phantom at the same time. Say good bye to the world phantom. You are going to be killed on your own grounds”
I can’t believe it; I am going to be dead in seconds.
Next thing I knew was that Dabai was lying on the floor, knocked out cold. I couldn’t believe my eyes, it was Heloise, my daughter that saved me. A kick from the back did the trick. I still remember teaching her that kick, she never really did it right but when a situation came, she did it perfectly. She then untied Kit.
Phantom: How did you get in?
Heloise: The same way you did.
Phantom(smiling): You saved both of us. But now listen. We will have to capture all the Singh pirates. So let’s go.
We ran outside, and the guards were a bit confused, that was enough for us to knock each and everyone of them down with the help of Wambasi Warriors.
Phantom(to the pirates): You guys just earned yourself a date with the jungle patrol.
Phantom(to warriors): Take them to Jungle patrol’s office.
Phantom(to kids): Kids, lets go.
On the way back home I asked Heloise what she learned from incident. She said that she learned to be brave to stand up against anything. When I asked Kit how it was to be tied up and kept as a hostage, he said that He learned that phantom is no superhero. Phantom a ordinary man with extra ordinary obstacles to defeat.
Now I am not just phantom now I am a dad who is proud of my kids, both of them have what it takes to be a phantom. And the Legacy will continue…
“Only the phantom could travel faster than time” Old jungle saying. But now I am failing to catch up with time. Times have gone so quickly. I still remember the day the twins were born, and the moment that I knew that it was twins. And then they learned to walk, then started school, now both are sophomores are college. I am getting old, but I will have to hold on until one of them is ready to take this role and continue the legacy. I don’t know which one, both are excellent at everything, but I have to choose someone soon.
Suddenly the jungle drums started pounding. The message was that the Tourist from America was taken hostage by some unknown terrorists. All I knew that second was Kit was in trouble. I will have to act fast. By the time Heloise heard the drums too. I told her to follow me and hero on her horse, a present that I gave her for her 20th birthday, which she named Thunder. When we ran out towards the horses, Guran came towards me. He looked panicked.
Guran: “O mighty friend, our dear kit is in deep trouble. I think you remember babaru, whom you gave 10 years of hard labor as a punishment for trying to steal valuables from the minor treasure room last year. As you know he escaped from deep woods, and you forgave him, and told to of us to spy on him at mawittan. Now one of our spies came to know saying that he sold the secret of the phantom legend to the Singh Brotherhood and the other one of the spies have been killed by him. He even told the brotherhood where the kids are.”
Phantom: “Wait Guran! Do you think that the Singh brother hood with the help of babaru kidnapped kit so that I will go and see them?”
Guran: “I am afraid so my great friend. They have camped near the wambasi, so we could tell the wambasi to attack them and save kit.”
Phantom: “No Guran, it’s too risky, I will do it myself. And Kit is my child, and it is my duty as a dad to save him. I am happy that Diana is not here. She would have been terrified if she was here.
Heloise: “Dad I will come with you to save Kid”
Phantom: “OK, but on one condition, that you obey what ever I say. I don’t want to lose you.”
We got on the horses, and rode towards wambasi tribe.
I heart was pounding so hardly, I didn’t know what I had to do. Should I surrender myself and Save Kit, or should I fight them, with Heloise on my side. I have to think of something fast. I might be at wambasi territory soon. Yes, I am going to surrender myself, and save the kids. I will find some way to escape from the Singh brotherhood, that’s what I did whole my life, and I am going to continue doing that till my death.
Phantom: “Heloise, Now listen carefully. We have a change of plan. You are going to stay with the wambasi tribe. I will tell them that you are the sister of the American Student, which is kit. They will take care of you.
Heloise:” But dad I can’t do that. I want to come with you. I want to learn how to handle this kind of situation, and moreover I want to save kit.”
Phantom: Okay, you are right. You have to learn how handle this kind of situation. But for your safety stay far from me and watch me. If kit comes out alone, just go home. I will come back later. If you think I am hurt you will still have to go back to deep woods, and seek help from Guran.
Heloise: OK dad.
We reached the Wambasi Tribe’s Territory, and as I thought they were waiting for me. They told me that they were to accompany me on this journey. I introduced Heloise as the missing kid’s sister. I was happy that I had a team of skilled archers for me. They were taught by the Bandars. The Leader of the group led me to the Singh Brotherhood’s camping place.
The place looked very guarded. They had armed Singh’s outside the camp, which make a direct attack difficult. I am still undecided on what to do, but I have to do something. I told them and Heloise to stay where we were, when I go in and look for Kit.
I slowly walked towards the tent; the guards haven’t seen me yet. I slowly moved into the main tent. Luckily, the guards didn’t even notice it. “Phantom moves like a tiger” old jungle saying. I looked inside the tent; I was surprised to see who it was. It was Dabai Singh.
Phantom: “hello mate, how is your day going? Long time no see.
Dabai: Impressive Phantom, how did you get in without any of my guards knowing? I put the best Singhs for that and you still got in.
Phantom: All of your guards were sleepy; make them some coffee when you have free time at bloomsbay prison will ya!
Dabai: Oh the Immortal phantom came to rescue an American student.
Hahaha I was waiting all my life for this moment. When my dear friend Babaru here told me the truth about you, I thought this guy was kidding. I took a risk by believing a traitor of his own tribe. (Babaru couldn’t believe what Dabai called him.) Sorry man but I don’t need you anymore. Good bye forever.
Before I could stop, Dabai threw a sharp knife at him.
Dabai: I did a favor for you man. I didn’t tell anyone your little secret because I wanted to do it all myself. This is some thing that many of my ancestors failed to accomplish. They all thought you were immortal. Now I know the SECRET. I am going to finish you and your son here. Your daughter wont even dare to become the phantom. She is a girl, what can she do herself.
He pointed his gun at Kit, and told me to drop all my weapons. I had to do it. Is the phantom legend going to end here? Can Heloise take over as phantom? I don’t know. I have to do some thing. Dabai took all the weapons and threw them into the back of the tent. I couldn’t move. If I move Kit will be in grave danger. I can’t afford than. More over Dabai is a very skilled and young warrior. I don’t know if even I could fight him barehanded. Now he pointed the gun at me.
Dabai: “I am the luckiest of the Singhs phantom. None of the Singhs got to kill the phantom and next phantom at the same time. Say good bye to the world phantom. You are going to be killed on your own grounds”
I can’t believe it; I am going to be dead in seconds.
Next thing I knew was that Dabai was lying on the floor, knocked out cold. I couldn’t believe my eyes, it was Heloise, my daughter that saved me. A kick from the back did the trick. I still remember teaching her that kick, she never really did it right but when a situation came, she did it perfectly. She then untied Kit.
Phantom: How did you get in?
Heloise: The same way you did.
Phantom(smiling): You saved both of us. But now listen. We will have to capture all the Singh pirates. So let’s go.
We ran outside, and the guards were a bit confused, that was enough for us to knock each and everyone of them down with the help of Wambasi Warriors.
Phantom(to the pirates): You guys just earned yourself a date with the jungle patrol.
Phantom(to warriors): Take them to Jungle patrol’s office.
Phantom(to kids): Kids, lets go.
On the way back home I asked Heloise what she learned from incident. She said that she learned to be brave to stand up against anything. When I asked Kit how it was to be tied up and kept as a hostage, he said that He learned that phantom is no superhero. Phantom a ordinary man with extra ordinary obstacles to defeat.
Now I am not just phantom now I am a dad who is proud of my kids, both of them have what it takes to be a phantom. And the Legacy will continue…
