05-05-2007, 01:24 AM
A very good story. Beautiful sketches. The cover art is really very good.
Mike Bullock has won "HIM". Especially the wording were carefully written by Mike, Example--"Our family fortune was made on.......":grin:
A nice explanation about the changes made in showing the Phantom's Good Mark from Wilson McCoy to Sy Barry's time.
The only thing on which the editor has to concentrate/improve is the coloring of the pictures---It's too dark in some of the areas--Will be much better if the dark content is avoided in the future issues. The dark coloring keeps away the reader from enjoying the details of the sketches.
Again the above mentioned is my opinion/suggestion, not an advice.
Eager to read the next part.
Thanks
Vethalan
Mike Bullock has won "HIM". Especially the wording were carefully written by Mike, Example--"Our family fortune was made on.......":grin:
A nice explanation about the changes made in showing the Phantom's Good Mark from Wilson McCoy to Sy Barry's time.
The only thing on which the editor has to concentrate/improve is the coloring of the pictures---It's too dark in some of the areas--Will be much better if the dark content is avoided in the future issues. The dark coloring keeps away the reader from enjoying the details of the sketches.
Again the above mentioned is my opinion/suggestion, not an advice.
Eager to read the next part.
Thanks
Vethalan

